Personal Statement and Resume
Taken together with the information on your resume and any addenda you include, your personal statement should tell us more about your voice, perspective, and the contribution you will make to Berkeley Law's entering class.
Personal Statement
A personal statement is required of all applicants. The statement should consist of between two and four double-spaced pages, ideally submitted to us through the LSAC EApp Service. There is no required topic for the statement. We believe it is your opportunity to describe the subjective qualities that you will bring to the study of law at Berkeley. We are as much interested in admitting human beings as we are in recognizing strong quantitative factors. We recognize that there are many personal traits and characteristics that are not measurable by an academic record or by a test score. Yet these are important to consider when building a law school class. Some of these traits include leadership potential, integrity, intellectual curiosity, personal accountability, determination, resiliency, motivation, compassion, creativity, and the ability to relate well with other people. Implicit in the value of a J.D. from Berkeley is the caliber of its classroom dialogue. That dialogue, in turn, is a function of the voices who comprise the class. Your personal statement should be a description of your voice.
We will read everything in your application so there is no need to turn your personal statement into a narrative version of your resume or to re-hash your academic successes. We have all of that information at our fingertips. However, because there is no interview process for applicants to Berkeley Law, your personal statement is your best chance to introduce us to who you are and is the closest we will come to hearing from you directly. Take advantage of the opportunity to tell us something more about you that we would not have learned otherwise. Of course, that can be something as simple as why you want to attend law school in the first place.
Your personal statement need not include a description of why you want to attend Berkeley Law in particular, nor do we expect you to know or explain what area of law you are interested in. However, many people do choose to cover these topics. If you do, make sure that the information you provide is well-researched and clearly connected to who you are.
Make your personal statement specific, well-written, and above all else, personal. And please, make it error-free.
Some Personal Statement Advice from a Past Faculty Admissions Committee Member
The following was written by a member of the Berkeley Law faculty (and past member of the Admissions Committee) in response to trends they were seeing in personal statement content and tone. We offer this feedback for you to consider when developing your personal statement:
"The statement should avoid simply summarizing what is in the resume. It should avoid simply asserting how able, accomplished, and well suited for law school the applicant is. It should avoid uninformed attempts to ingratiate oneself through exaggerated claims of one’s interest in Boalt...For instance, more than a few applicants stressed how much they want to work with named individuals who are at best passingly related to a Center or the like and aren’t even members of the faculty; these claims make one doubt the applicant’s due diligence...
The statement should avoid self-absorbed autobiography. What we need is something that doesn’t simply assert, a.k.a brag about, how qualified and impressive the applicant is, but rather demonstrates it through the substance of what is said in the personal statement. If it is going to be autobiographical, I for one would prefer it to generalize a bit; that is, instead of, 'How I changed as a result of this experience and now am so special,' it should talk about how and why such experiences can affect people.
“I felt the cold, sharp edge of a knife at my neck.” “ ‘You rich Americans are all alike,’ she screamed.” “I’ve never been so scared in my life.” “The child’s belly was swollen and scabbed.” You get the picture. Start the essay with a dramatic, unexplained sentence designed to grab the startled reader’s attention. (In fact, what it does to the reader is produce a dismayed feeling of, “Oh no, not another one of these.”). Continue this dramatic episode for a short paragraph without tipping off its relevance to the application. Begin the next paragraph by switching to expository style and informing us of what you were doing in this dire situation and how it was part of the background that makes you a special applicant to law school. Develop why you are so special in the rest of the statement. Conclude with a touching statement returning to the opening gambit, about how now, after law school, you can really help that little girl in rags.
It is very clear that many applicants have been coached by someone that this is how to write a compelling personal statement...This format is transparently manipulative, formulaic, and coached. Except for the occasional novelist we admit, none of our students or graduates is going to write in this style again; none, thank goodness, is going to begin a brief with, “He stood frozen in fear as the gunman appeared out of the darkness.” So, this artifice is irrelevant to law and counter-productive: Once it ceases to surprise – and it did so more than 10 years ago – it just becomes a cliché which really ought to be held against the writer. Not only using clichés, but also having been coached ought in an ideal world to discount an application. Needless to say, however, I did not hold these statements against the writers; you don’t feel you should do that. Often the bulk of the statement does report on impressive activities that are relevant to admission. [I]t is transparent when essay formulas have been coached, and we (should) strongly advise applicants to write in their own voice and style and without trying to dramatize what they have to say in order to attract our attention."
Addenda
You also may submit separate statements or addenda to highlight any particular topics that you wish to bring to our attention. Addenda are not solicited on the application, but they are accepted. Examples might include a history of sub-par standardized test-taking (a copy of previous test scores is required), how you might contribute to the diversity of the school, or any other specific incidents for which you wish to offer a detailed explanation.
Resume
In addition to the statement, we recommend that you include a resume. The resume may be more than one page. A good resume will provide chronological information about your experiences, travels, and accomplishments. You do not need to highlight "law-related" experiences, and likewise, you should include work experience of all types.
